Interesting Responses to Chapter Ten

Hanging flowers Cen Goth Huge Green4Interesting - one reader of Chapter 10 of As Long As She Lives, felt that Sean's over-protective reaction to Kitty and Riley being friends was sweet, and I was concerned I hadn't made it clear that he was being more than a little patronizing. Then another reader reacted violently, saying she hated "big brothers" like that, that they were borderline incestuous and that he was "a douchebag" (she also said it was cliche, but I prefer to call it a trope - it's deliberately so, afterall!)  So, I reckon that's a good couple of samples and  it's okay, at least for this draft!